Today my class were learning instructions about honey sandwiches and we had to make our own instructions.
My first instructions weren’t specific so I used red font and changed them to make them more clear.
Here is my work (my instructions)
Have you ever made a honey sandwich?
Have you ever baked a muffin or something like it?
Kia Ora Olivia,
I like the emojis you have added and how it looks like you put a lot of effort into this post. Maybe next time you could add a picture of toast at the end so that the person that is viewing knows what it looks like and I have made a honey sandwich and I have even baked a cake. Have you?
from Xavier
Kia Ora Xavier,
Yes I have made a cake and a honey sandwich. Thank you for the feedback and I will add a picture of toast at the end. Thank you for saying what you thought of my post
From Olivia